The Next Draft

Revision First Steps

So you’ve written your “#@&!*% first draft” – now what? Before you start polishing your words, you need to make sure your book is built on a solid foundation. Laura Backes and Emma Walton Hamilton take you through the first steps and basic strategies of structural revision for both fiction and narrative non-fiction to move your picture book manuscript to the next level.

You'll leave this 50-minute presentation with strategies you can use today and your manuscript to whip it into shape and get it ready for prime time.

"These two always make what they are explaining so clear -- what steps to take, where to start, etc. Revision is my least favorite thing -- and it is always a challenge to know where to start -- and they provided some great answers. " - Carolyne R.


Your Instructor


Emma Walton Hamilton and Laura Backes
Emma Walton Hamilton and Laura Backes

Emma Walton Hamilton is a best-selling author, award-winning editor, stage and television producer, and writing coach. With her mother, actress/author Julie Andrews, Emma has co-authored over thirty children’s books, nine of which have been on the NY Times Bestseller list, including The Very Fairy Princess series. She teaches Children’s Literature for Stony Brook University’s Creative Writing MFA and is the co-host of the Julie’s Library Podcast. Emma’s first poetry collection, Door to Door, was published in fall 2022, along with a new picture book co-authored with her mother, The First Notes: The Story of Do Re Mi.

Laura Backes is publisher of Children’s Book Insider, The Children’s Writing Monthly, and co-owner of Writing Blueprints (along with husband Jon Bard). Laura has edited and critiqued thousands of picture book manuscripts. Her credits include Best Books for Kids Who (Think They) Hate to Read (Random House); articles for Writer’s Digest, The Writer and Children’s Writer’s & Illustrator’s Market; and technical editor of Writing Children’s Books for Dummies.


Course Curriculum



Frequently Asked Questions


When does the course start and finish?
The course starts now and never ends! It is a completely self-paced online course - you decide when you start and when you finish.
How long do I have access to the course?
How does lifetime access sound? After enrolling, you have unlimited access to this course for as long as you like - across any and all devices you own.
What if I am unhappy with the course?
We would never want you to be unhappy! If you are unsatisfied with your purchase, contact us in the first 30 days and we will give you a full refund.

"This one was valuable because they gave many, many ways you should revise and showed you how and why.' " - Elizabeth W.

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